A clear thesis statement can be found in the second paragraph of the essay. The thesis statement provides a clear indication of the main content of the essay. A clear definition of the word 'consensus' is done in the first paragraph. This helps to set the boundary in which the content of the essay will be lingering in throughout.
Three main ideas thought out by the writer are presented clearly and systematically in the essay. The writer is also able to express his views and reasoning clearly in the main body of the essay. This makes reading and understanding the essay much less of a chore.
However further improvements can be made. Supporting evidences or quotations from the passage which the writer is referring to can be used in the essay. It will help to establish and back up his arguments and viewpoints strongly.
In general it is a well thought and structured essay, at least in my opinion. Grammatical errors are not too common and sentence structures have few flaws.
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