CHUA YUN XUAN POST3
As stated, the definition of 'consensus' was cited from article three in order to have a clear reference point.
In response to the feedback on the first written assignment one draft, an additional citation had been added to the final draft to increase the amount of references made from article three. As most of the ideas were not obtained directly from article three, it is difficult to extract supporting evidences or quotations. Thus, supporting of the arguments and viewpoints was done through a logical approach. It is also agreeable that some grammatical errors are present and sentence structures can be further improved.
In conclusion, clear feedbacks with direct references to the portion of written assignment one draft being responded on was given. These constructive comments will definitely aid in improving the written assignment one draft for the final version.
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