Wednesday, March 10, 2010

e-portfolio posting 4- comments on Yun Xuan's e-portfolio posting 4

The summary given by Yun Xuan is concise and straight to the point. In his first paragraph he stated clearly the intent of the author and its basic idea of the article. This also helps the reader to understand the direction which Yun Xuan is taking to write further for his summary.

In his second paragraph, he elaborates more about the main idea of the article by citing examples from the article. For his examples, he mentions three distinguished diplomats and their high level of proficiencies in the art of diplomacy have influenced the author to the importance of a strong negotiator for the summit and the criteria to be one.

In my opinion, I think that this summary is short and very well organized. It is also very clear and boasts in text examples to support the idea of the article.

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